The main improvement that needs to be made on my double page spread is the article itself, in my opinion it doesn't exaggerated the full potential of the story. Also it does not have any relevance to the music industry and the how successful the artist is doing. Clearly the colour scheme also could be improved however that involves the reconstruction of my front cover and contents page also. As previously mentioned in my post regarding improving my front cover, the quality of the images are poor therefore I will need to re-shoot giving me good quality photographs. These improvements will ultimately increase the overall professional image of my magazine.
So things I need to change:
- Re-take my Photographs
- Again delete the tacky music symbols placed on the page.
- Make the article much more related to the actual music industry.
- Ensure the text in the article follows a conventional format- small text size and clear font.
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