Improving my Contents Page (Music Magazine)

There are many improvements to be made on my contents page mainly involving completely re-organising the layout of the page. Although I did use many forms of conventions on the page, the layout is not effective making the page look unclear and un-organised. The quality of the images is not very good; the lighting shades at the location should have been altered to produce a better quality image. I am happy with the use of mise-en-scene in the photographs which promotes the ideology of rebellion and the rock genre through both the colour red and t-shirts which promote the bands themselves. The contents page would have appeared much more successful if I had only made the images larger providing a main article for the audience. The features section at the right of the page does look well organised with clear indications of the sub headings and the text below providing detail. I must also include an editorial note with a new image of the editor and finally make the contents page much more appealing for the audience. 

So things I need to change:

• Remove the unconventional images of music beats.
• Retake the images of the female model using effective lighting techniques.
• Make the improved images larger providing a main article.
• Ensure the contents page continues the house style from the front cover.
• Possibly make the title "contents" stand out more.
• Include an editorial note, this is very conventional of contents pages.
• Reorganize the whole layout of the page.